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Innocent Life and Death
Contributed by
pyrofungus
on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 02:13:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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A weak hill
Growin flowers
Wild flowers as you will!
All upon a naked hill
Rest upon its deadened grass
Watch its restless youth as its grass disappears completely
Flowers still bloomin wild and freely
Pick a batch
toss it in a vase with watter
Watch 'em slowly die
Catch a glimpse of innocent life and death
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2004-06-12 14:13:49]
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Re: Innocent Life and Death
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 02:42:07 PM AEST
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wow that was a beautiful write...great I loved it....the ending was terrific...I loved it once again...
much love,
Dani |
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Re: Innocent Life and Death
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by deathdrop on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 12:43:07 PM AEST
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It's interesting how you picked up on such delicate things. not alll poets do that.
this was reallly good to read.
keep it up! |
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