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Who Cares?
Contributed by
pyrofungus
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Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 02:08:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I can't feel
I know I'm alive
Sitting here thinking
Why am I still here
Could I just fall over and die
I'm so tired
I haven't moved for hours
Unable to smile
I'm alone and unloved
Who would care if I croaked
Pretty sure no one would
This miserable life that I'm living
Drains out of my still body
and bleeds onto the people I know
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Re: Who Cares?
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 02:33:10 PM AEST
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everyone cares....some way...I have written not self struggeling but suicide...I talk about my self struggeling...welll if anything I thought your writing was good...I look forward to reading and commenting some more...they are filled with feeling and emotion...makes them powerful...great write...
read and comment my stuff if you want, I'd love to hear what you think...
much love,
Dani |
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Re: Who Cares?
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by Archie on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 02:51:38 PM AEST
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"So what're gonna do about
keep feeling sorry for yourself
get up from the place you're sitting
give some one a little bit of your wealth
Sometimes we need a little kick in the pants
before we realise what we have
all you have to do is be a friend to some one else"
Just an idea from a person who goes through the same thing. |
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Re: Who Cares?
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by saveMEfromMYSELF on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 04:34:33 PM AEST
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| Here's a thought, try thinking of the people tht know you. Think of what they say to you, you should find they like you. If it doesn't help I'm sorry, It's what I think of when I'm depressed. Keep your eye's on the skies mate, Your wings will sprout soon. |
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Re: Who Cares?
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by deathdrop on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 12:55:52 PM AEST
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| i hope you're not still feeling this low! |
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Re: Who Cares?
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by GuyJular on
Friday, 20th August 2010 @ 02:29:40 PM AEST
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| Quit being emo |
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