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Friendship Garden
Contributed by
kristina_simpson_stewart
on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 01:21:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Friendship is like a flower
planted in a certain soil
if not tended daily can cared for
it will fade and spoil
Like a well tended garden
its beauty for all to see
I hope our friendship shows, just as beautifully.
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2004-06-12 13:21:58] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Friendship Garden
(User Rating: 1 ) by Archie on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 03:23:49 PM AEST (User
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Very cool poem except for one thing on line 3 I think you meant to use the word and but you used the word can, other than that your poem is well spoken and deep. |
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