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Falling Apart
Contributed by
Bloodthirsty
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Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 12:36:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
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My death
Your pain
My sun
Your rain
My anger
Your love
Earth below
Sky above
Emotions strong
Words weak
Dont feel
Dont speek
Think of me as I am
Think of me when you can
Forget me not when I am gone
Remember not that life is done
Know not the anger I have for you
Show not the pain I put you through
There wasnt anything you could do
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Bloodthirsty
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2004-06-12 12:36:23]
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Re: Falling Apart
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by TheSchroedmeister on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 12:38:42 PM AEST
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| Can't beat that killer rythm. I enjoyed this piece, thank you. |
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Re: Falling Apart
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by pixie on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 12:44:14 PM AEST
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Wow, this is trully brilliant, cant say anything more
pixie xx
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Re: Falling Apart
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by Britty on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 12:46:54 PM AEST
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wow!! very good write.
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Re: Falling Apart
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by LoVeLy_4_StEvE on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 02:04:29 PM AEST
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Very good write, I enjoyed it.
Hugs...
~*Lovely*~ |
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