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Contributed by
Bloodthirsty
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Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 12:28:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Metal to skin
Cuts line so thin
A line of red
A sign of dead
Blood on skin
Hides tears within
Tears so cold
Fears so bold
The pain is new but the feeling is old
Many secrets left untold
Copyright ©
Bloodthirsty
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2004-06-12 12:28:54]
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 12:40:44 PM AEST
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| Wow. That was a really powerful poem! I really liked it. I think the short sentences added to the power. I hope life gets atleast a little better for you... Pull out a book, that sometimes helps. I really really liked this one. |
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by pixie on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 12:41:41 PM AEST
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This is amazing for such a short and simple poem, well done
pixie xx |
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 12:15:07 AM AEST
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| i agree with the other comments. excellent write. |
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