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Love I want
Contributed by
markey
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Wednesday, 16th October 2002 @ 07:30:00 AM in AEST
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Love I want
Each man dreams a different dream is his life,
Some want the money, the power, a wife.
Some want the glory, some want the fame,
I don’t think that any two are really the same.
What I want from life is a chance to be me,
To love with a passion, an urge to be free.
I want to love you and lead you to where we should be,
And then in return, I hope you love me,
Because to love someone freely is often an ask,
But to get it returned is sometimes a task.
I tell you my darling we start out as friends,
That part of this baby, I hope never ends.
Then if we are taken on loves’ winding road,
Then I promise my darling, I’ll carry the load.
To love and to care and carry us through,
I promise my darling, I’ll always love you.
Copyright ©
markey
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2002-10-16 07:30:00]
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Re: Love I want
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by orgygirl on
Wednesday, 16th October 2002 @ 08:25:18 AM AEST
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I thought this poem was very sweet. Nice work for a first posting. Kepp it up.
Take care
Rebecca |
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Re: Love I want
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 16th October 2002 @ 10:18:24 AM AEST
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| Your rhyme and rhythm is excellent ... and a really nice message in the words. |
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Re: Love I want
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by Lovingangel4u on
Wednesday, 16th October 2002 @ 06:07:48 PM AEST
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This is really beautifully written with an open heart and a caring soul. Im sure you will find that dream.
Take Care,
Carmen |
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Re: Love I want
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by Markey on
Wednesday, 16th October 2002 @ 06:25:49 PM AEST
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| Thank you very much for your feedback, its inspiring. I am putting in more tonight. Would appreciate your comments. TY again. |
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Re: Love I want
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by Markey on
Wednesday, 16th October 2002 @ 06:26:38 PM AEST
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| Thank you very much for your feedback, its inspiring. I am putting in more tonight. Would appreciate your comments. TY again. |
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