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Look me in the eyes?
Contributed by
Hannah_Heaven
on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 12:07:28 PM in AEST
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this pain seems to be seeping through my veins
i cant will the pain away
its killing me
slowly
like a drug
its addictive
deadly
poisonous
black....
dont turn away from me
look me in the eyes
you cant can you?
ive changed so much
ive did things your ashamed of
ive loved and let lose
ive followed the crowd
oboeyed the laws
i WAS a rebel
now im NORMAL
different was the beauty
now were all the same
followers
no question
no answers
just a life of laws to live by
follow or else
warning sirens everywhere
am i having doubts?
no.....?
i dont know anymore
im drownding into madness
its turning me in
its killing me
dont turn away
look me in the eyes
dont hide like i did
behind a mask
but let it slip and they seen me for who iam
a black beauty
not normal and white
*prayers*
youve ran away
are we playing hide and seek
am i it?
coz i seem to be hiding too
listen to the instruments of the day
look at the lights of the night
imps and fairys gone....
mysterious vanished
they dont belong
like me.....
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Hannah_Heaven
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Re: Look me in the eyes?
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 12:18:06 PM AEST
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| every situation is different but this poem reminded me of something...I think I know your pain...lol I hate when people say they know, cuz they usually don't but I really hope everything turns out okay for you :) |
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Re: Look me in the eyes?
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by pixie on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 12:36:11 PM AEST
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This is a well expressed poem of pain, great work
pixie xx |
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Re: Look me in the eyes?
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by LoVeLy_4_StEvE on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 02:10:10 PM AEST
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I understand what you are saying here. I went through the same thing. Great Write, you express your feelings well here.
*Hugs*
~*lovely*~ |
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Re: Look me in the eyes?
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 03:09:25 PM AEST
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very powerful feeling put into this...MASTRPIECE!!!!! I loved it....5/5
read and comment my stuff if you want...Id love to hear what you think...
much love,
Dani |
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