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Missing
Contributed by
Hannah_Heaven
on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 11:13:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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missing the hand
missing the love
missing the kisses at night
missing you
even then i sacrificed my heart for you
i needed to know you loved me
but now your missing
im missing you
the dedication
the tears
the shoulder to lean on
the comforting
its all gone
missing from my life
im incomplete
someones missing
a part of me
you wont try for me
anymore
and now im running away
down to anywhere
not stopping to look back
even though somethings missing
and i cant carry on
its like not having a meaning
life is to live
but i cant wait to die
even though i tried
i sacrificed
but you wont try for me
an i didnt know your name
isnt something missing?
like you
like me
missing....
Copyright ©
Hannah_Heaven
... [
2004-06-12 11:13:56]
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Re: Missing
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by Archie on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 11:23:06 AM AEST
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Good poem and it kind of reminds me of a song by Whitney Houston called "Where You Are" here is an excerpt:
"And as I turn the key and look inside
my heart would not return.
These lonely times just never seem to end,
yet you find, I know I should be there where you are" |
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Re: Missing
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by pixie on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 11:25:10 AM AEST
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Awwwww so sad and so beautiful, very well done to you
pixie xx |
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Re: Missing
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 12:21:02 PM AEST
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| so sad...reminds me of my poetry lol well, yours is better though....lol nice job |
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Re: Missing
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by Britty on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 12:53:30 PM AEST
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| this was an extreamly sad poem. good job |
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Re: Missing
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by LoVeLy_4_StEvE on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 02:26:26 PM AEST
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This was a very sad poem, but a great write.. So there for I enjoyed it... So thank you.
~*Hugs*~
~*lovely*~ |
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