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When It Comes

Contributed by Silent-No-More on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 11:13:16 AM in AEST
Topic: poets



Pressing up against my skin
It pushes hard, forcing through
Relentless, it has come to me again
Screaming, suddenly, it debuts

In a heartbeat, it is fully there
My complete attention it implores
For me, it seems, it does not care
Wicked, insisting, wanting more

I have no choice, but to succumb
I give myself once again to it
And simply wait until it is done
I its victim, though I feel unfit

Pressing up against my skin
Not externally, but from inside out
I surrender to poetic thought again
Letting it, the poem, break out




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Re: When It Comes (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 11:18:44 AM AEST
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An idea at birth not forced but from the heart, great write.


Re: When It Comes (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 11:34:09 AM AEST
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Trully great write

pixie xx


Re: When It Comes (User Rating: 1 )
by DragonLuvSong on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 11:38:47 AM AEST
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i think this is so great, writing it is a birth of your ideas, i think you conveyed it well.


Re: When It Comes (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 11:40:58 AM AEST
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Funny... I never thought of writing poetry in that way... but it works....

Your poem.... has a... I don't know, almost desperate feel to it (in a good way) I like it. It draws you on....

Jaime


Re: When It Comes (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 12:23:13 PM AEST
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the feeling this gives is spine-chilling...i love it! lol


Re: When It Comes (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 03:11:09 PM AEST
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this is brilliant!! i totally relate lol, hugs n' love nessa

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Re: When It Comes (User Rating: 1 )
by brigitte7735 on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 07:18:32 PM AEST
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Absolutely sensational, as always

Always,
Vanessa ( 090404 )


Re: When It Comes (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 09:49:05 PM AEST
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Yes, this is very much like the way it works. Like an insistent lover that won't let you be until you give to the need.

Rita


Re: When It Comes (User Rating: 1 )
by RockNwhls on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 09:44:26 AM AEST
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fantastic!! that is exactly how it is. sometimes i feel like that guy in Alien in the diner!!
scarlett


Re: When It Comes (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 02:34:00 PM AEST
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deep silent.... I love it! this is a grabbing piece. I enjoy the words you use, they flow great! unique approach towards write about poetic thoughts... sometimes I feel poems in myself the same way. great great great poem !!! A+++++


Re: When It Comes (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 03:39:49 PM AEST
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this is in an incredible write which all poets can relate to and should cherish, as it beautifully explains the power of releasing a thing of wonder as a poem


Re: When It Comes (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 01:14:19 AM AEST
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Excellent piece! *applauds*
Nice twist. I didn't know what it might be until the end. Well done.
Andrew


Re: When It Comes (User Rating: 1 )
by MDodgen on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 03:12:48 PM AEST
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wonderful imagery. writing is like that sometimes, so much pressure building up. unitl it forces it way out, great write.


Re: When It Comes (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 09:37:23 AM AEST
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Wonderful. I know the feeling. Stop resisting.
Stitch


Re: When It Comes (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 08:20:45 PM AEST
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Very clever! I actually read it twice to get the full effect.
Nicely done!


Re: When It Comes (User Rating: 1 )
by xSlashXPrettyXSkinx on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 05:17:49 PM AEST
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Again wow. I had no idea what to expect, from the beginning. The end was sensational. This was very well written. You have a great talent, SNM.

Lindsey


Re: When It Comes (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowDaughter on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 04:14:07 PM AEST
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*applauds appreciatively*

Worthy of the honor of being written by you, SNM. A beautiful poem-- 'tis lucky for the rest of us that you surrender so ^ ^.

--Nora


Re: When It Comes (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 02:35:33 AM AEST
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How is it that try as we might ... we cannot change what we are, or ignore it for that matter ?

Minstrels, bards, and sages are we
With voices inside that must be free
Be it by fate or some decree
We can not escape our destiny

Nazmythian ~


Re: When It Comes (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 12:46:31 PM AEST
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You never cease to amaze me!


Re: When It Comes (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 07:26:30 PM AEST
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Very well written and stated!!! You have definitely captured what it is to read great poetry; including yours.




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