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Escape
Contributed by
Luinil
on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 07:33:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Locked away
Door shut tight
Now I sleep
To end this night
Peaceful dreams
And all is well
Till morning’s light
Break’s sleeps spell
Copyright ©
Luinil
... [
2004-06-12 07:33:48]
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Re: Escape
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by arden on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 07:51:30 AM AEST
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short and really good. the flow was very smooth. really nicely done. i liked it.
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Re: Escape
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by Archie on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 08:30:16 AM AEST
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| This is an awesome poem simple and deep. |
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Re: Escape
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by deathdrop on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 10:47:22 AM AEST
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| this may be short, but its very effective! |
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Re: Escape
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by thumper on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 11:02:23 AM AEST
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Short and succinct! Very nice. Shame it has to be like that. I feel for ya.
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Re: Escape
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 09:59:27 PM AEST
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I had a roommate like that in college. Horrid experience. Hope it gets better soon.
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