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god's toys
Contributed by
lonelywolf04
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Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 05:27:55 AM in AEST
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God is dead and I am too,
He don't like me and he don't like you,
You say you owe him for what you got,
And you say its alot,
But how about you look,
At all that he has took,
He enjoys,
Playing with us we are his play toys,
He gives some,
And takes more,
He gives one,
And takes four,
God is nuthing but a sick boy,
And our pain gives him joy.
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Re: god's toys
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by Archie on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 05:34:40 AM AEST
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Very interesting words and reminds me of the parable of the talents which I shall not quote here.
"If God is so unjust why do we still walk the earth and breath the air; why does he not act in our affairs?" |
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Re: god's toys
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by emystar on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 05:51:51 AM AEST
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I respect your rright to have your own opinion.
That would all depend on what u speak of or what God u serve.serve.
God is luv and obviously u have been hurt terribly in luv.
luv, huggs, faith, hope,
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Re: god's toys
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by wray on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 06:08:33 AM AEST
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| How horrible, thanks for the spiritual and emotional scarring.. A unique take *cough* lol no it's interesting in that it makes me wonder what could have happened to you to make you reach this frame of mind. |
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Re: god's toys
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by Luinil on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 07:36:43 AM AEST
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| i understand how you're feeling. your poem is a really good expression tho. keep up the good work and hang in there :-) |
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