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Lone WOLF
Contributed by
lonelywolf04
on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 05:21:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I am the crazy one,
The one that holds the unseen gun,
Ready to fire it into my soul,
To leave this hellhole,
To finish the rebirth of the old into the new,
Good for me and for you,
The wolf inside has been reborn,
Not letting it's self be torn,
No not again not this time,
It is in its prime,
Unable to be week,
It has nothing to seek,
It is alone,
Hidden untell he is needed to be shown.
Copyright ©
lonelywolf04
... [
2004-06-12 05:21:37]
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Re: Lone WOLF
(User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 05:25:25 AM AEST
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| This is a good poem marred only by misspelled words on line 11 and line 14 |
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Re: Lone WOLF
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by pixie on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 10:35:00 AM AEST
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Great work
pixie xx |
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