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memory
Contributed by
lonelywolf04
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Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 05:13:24 AM in AEST
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LovePoetry
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I don't want to be the enemey,
Say good bye to the memory,
When you can't see,
What its done to me,
I want to be,
Everything I can't see,
If only I could change into,
Something like you,
If only I could make the rebirth true,
And become everything I want to,
Maybe I can change,
And rearrange,
I will not be the enemy,
I will never ever say goodbye to the memory.
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lonelywolf04
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2004-06-12 05:13:24]
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Re: memory
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by Archie on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 05:21:42 AM AEST
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This is a good write and reminds me of another song that talks about memories "The Way We Were" sung by Gladys Knight. Here is a quote:
"Could it all have been so simple then
or has time rewritten every line
and if we had a chance to do it all again
tell me would we, could we" |
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Re: memory
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by wray on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 06:13:48 AM AEST
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| Never heard that song before but your poem can definitely pass for song lyrics. Very nice. |
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