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Dena
Contributed by
marsh62287
on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 01:22:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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lost
in endless time
with no joy
till this day
when ye found me
and set thy path
into one endless
deep black sea
of pure happiness
in one short stroke
of one short day
i felt happier
than years of my life
all put in
of one day
with more beauty
than all tomorrows
will ever seek
i fell in love
with you today
and intend to love you
for everyday
though all hell and paradise
that God can for see
i will love you
you will see
Copyright ©
marsh62287
... [
2004-06-12 01:22:27]
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Re: Dena
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 01:31:03 AM AEST
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Very powerfull, upbeat , sure write.
It definally says eternal luv.
Good work.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Dena
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by buchi on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 04:04:59 PM AEST
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| Alas!! LOVESTRUCK..you have it all there..every line swoons and time is as poeticly depicted is awesome...you are good and Dena is pure!!! |
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Re: Dena
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by frohemiasweetie on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 01:18:16 PM AEST
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| Oh, that was almost painfully beautiful...I really liked that one. Peace |
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