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Lasting Moment
Contributed by
chimo
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Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 12:57:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
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This is the final hour
This is the darkest hour
This is the time to die
This is the time to fly
This is too much pain for me
This is my only reality
If I take the time to unwind
I will find peace within my mind
Altered states of time
Altered sounds will rhyme
Till I come back down
You wont see me frown
If I lose control
I will end up in a hole
Copyright ©
chimo
... [
2004-06-12 00:57:15]
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Re: Lasting Moment
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by Archie on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 01:04:11 AM AEST
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| Good poem |
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Re: Lasting Moment
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by emystar on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 01:13:51 AM AEST
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U get your point accross well even tho it's a bit sad.
Please stay out of the holes.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Lasting Moment
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 02:36:02 AM AEST
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| a unique poem. short and strong. remember to not let them bring you down. A+++ |
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Re: Lasting Moment
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by pixie on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 10:46:05 AM AEST
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great poem, very well written
pixie xx |
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