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I really do depend on people...
Contributed by
Living_In_My_Dream
on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 12:34:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Withered romance guarentees
heartbreak and setting free
It's so wonderful, you see at first
but then later on it's now freedom you thirst
I love you there's no doubt...
but tell me is it running out
you dont really know what Im about
your just a spout spewing out lies
when really whats best I think...
is saying our good-byes
I've had enough of this
I need to expierence someone else's kiss
spark a new romance
a new type of bliss
is this my fear speaking?
is this us Im mistaking?
you contradict the fact
that Im lying on the ground
when really I do still want you around
I plead that you stay...
I swear I'll watch the things I say
is it you thats giving up now?
turning your back
well I'll tell you this
Im here to stay
no one will stand in my way
I'll stand right behind you
I'll be the one when your lost
to guide you
please dont give up
Im sorry for the doubts I had...
I'm sorry for making you feel bad
if you give up I'm through
theres nothing no longer here for me to live for
so tell me what would be the point...???
just don't...
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Re: I really do depend on people...
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by Chimo on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 01:01:56 AM AEST
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very nice poem!
I have felt the same way before |
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Re: I really do depend on people...
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 03:01:28 AM AEST
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Withered romance guarentees
heartbreak and setting free-- wow! I like these lines. they stand out the most to me, you know I always relate with your works, this one is no different. great poem very strong A++++ |
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Re: I really do depend on people...
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by rugby_player on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 07:54:06 PM AEST
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good job...but i noticed something you said "i really do depend on people" didn't you tell me not to depend on people you should do the same
any ways great job keep it up |
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