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This cold october morning
Contributed by
troubadour
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Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 10:42:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The colorful leaves are falling.
Swirling around and around.
Following the path of the wind.
On sidewalk and street alike.
The grass, also swaying to the breeze.
Birds.
Flying high.
In the sky.
Gray with storm clouds.
Cars zooming past me.
On this cold october morning.
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troubadour
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2004-06-11 22:42:11]
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Re: This cold october morning
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by shelby on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 10:45:47 PM AEST
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nice details I can see this October morn though now I live in a desert
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Re: This cold october morning
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 10:46:19 PM AEST
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I love the fall, the colder the better. Your imagery is good. I almost felt that October wind. Enjoyable read.
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Re: This cold october morning
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by Archie on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 11:08:05 PM AEST
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| This is a good poem much like my poem "The Music of the World" |
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