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Pain
Contributed by
willow_tara72002
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Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 10:08:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I cant take this pain.
I can take away the shame.
I don’t understand why I cant feel what’s real.
This pain wont go away,
Everything you had to say.
I cant believe I’m disgusted with myself.
I don’t know what to do,
That’s what you’ve brought me to.
I don’t want to cry no more,
I don’t understand this.
I want to live,
I want to feel what’s real.
I want to let go of this pain that’s deep inside.
Now I cant move on,
That’s what’s really wrong.
I know that you hate me,
I’m sorry you hate me,
But cant you see that this is killing me.
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Re: Pain
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by imaginary on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 10:22:24 PM AEST
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yeah i know the feeling. Its a great start, i hope to read more of your poetry.
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Re: Pain
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by pixie on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 10:51:04 AM AEST
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Very powerful words, great poem
pixie xx |
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Re: Pain
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by Trisha on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 11:50:09 PM AEST
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| You Have Strong Words. |
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