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Contributed by
LOWMAN613
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Wednesday, 16th October 2002 @ 06:00:00 AM in AEST
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I heard you talking today,You said you never wanted me any way!
Well If I could speak and express to you,
I might be a handful but I love you,
Even though I can't see you just yet,
You'll adore me I can just bet,
Please don't let the doctors take me away,
I'm crying inside, you can't hear what I say,
I already have all my fingers and toes,
I can smell you Mommy with my little nose,
I'm alive inside of you breathing what you breath,
Please Mommy I don't want to leave,
I'll be really good and everyday give you a kiss,
If the doctors take me away,think of what you'll miss,
I know you think that I'll be a pain,
But please Mommy let me explain,
I'm a part of you and I want to live,
I know you have a lot of love to give,
So please give me a chance,Mommy I know you'll love me,
Just let me be born, and you will soon see!
Copyright ©
LOWMAN613
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2002-10-16 06:00:00]
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by Daniel on
Wednesday, 16th October 2002 @ 06:08:18 AM AEST
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| wow... this is awesome. some of the wordings in there is kinda cheezy, but the idea of it all is quite the eye-opener. and thankfully, it helped that person make a choice she thought was the right one. if only more people could read this, because so many are struggling with this decision. you should send this out in a newsletter to people or something. it's definitely a keeper that you will want to share with everybody. a good write this is. kudos! ;0) -daniel |
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 16th October 2002 @ 10:06:12 AM AEST
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| What a lovely angle to come from - writing from the baby's point of view .... so sweet. I enjoyed this :)))) |
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by Youngster on
Wednesday, 16th October 2002 @ 10:12:42 AM AEST
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Exellent poem, I really enjoy poems with high moral value, and the pro-life issues are very close to my heart. My God Bless You!
-Wade |
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by MisterRight on
Thursday, 17th October 2002 @ 03:48:42 AM AEST
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All I can say is WOW! Anything else will just ruin it.
Curtis |
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th October 2002 @ 03:59:01 AM AEST
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| it made me cry.. i just had an abortion a week ago and it was the worst decision i ever made.. i wish i could have read this poem sooner. |
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th October 2002 @ 12:01:19 AM AEST
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| this is the mommy you helped & I will always be thankful for you,so will little Jessica!thank you! |
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Re: No Title
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 18th October 2002 @ 12:08:02 PM AEST
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| I'm very sorry! What ever the case I'm sure you felt you made the right choice,I am pro life,although if a person was raped That would be a tough one!!! God bless! |
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 07:14:44 AM AEST
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| Made me choke! How could any selfish person do this!? |
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