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Session 1
Contributed by
Drowning-in-light
on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 10:02:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Withdrawl.
I will withdrawl into myself and let the words flow out of every part of my body.
I hear whispers of my name in the bathroom. The deep, ruby walls of the stall enclose around me amd the bright white tiles step into places my mind can see but
my eyes can't find in this moment.
The light in this place seems to resemble the day and the darkened windows are paintings of reality.
The real world that doesn't hear the music resembling the soundtrack of my thoughts that plays over the slightly used P.A system.
The brightly colored,dust covered, fake flowers sparatically placed themselves all over the glass divide store.
My thoughts can't seem to stay in order.
The pain and frustration seems to be overwelming.
Let me jump back now into another moment.
Back to a place where I didn't know who I was. This place of yesterday decorated with my mother's personality and
landscaped by my father's hands.
I walk in and remember all the things I never knew I forgot.
How do I react to yesterday?
A yesterday when I was never sure
of what tommorow held.
When today it all seems so planned.
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Drowning-in-light
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2004-06-11 22:02:27]
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Re: Session 1
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by xxbreathlessx on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 02:48:06 PM AEST
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| i loved this, i think your a truly talented writer, i love your choice of words and i LOVE your imagery, once again , AWESOME job! |
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Re: Session 1
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by Psyche on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 11:03:30 PM AEST
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| What incredibly descriptive stanzas... I hear/feel the millions of thoughts wanting to be communicated in this situation. Its almost overwhelming as a reader, because you do such a great job of bringing me into the moment. A moment I do not envy the voice, mind you, but you have done a fantastic job IMHO. Thank you for sharing this! |
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Re: Session 1
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 12:04:56 AM AEST
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| great write. |
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