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Wakeing up in some one's soul.
Contributed by
Drowning-in-light
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Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 09:48:57 PM in AEST
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I woke up somewhere dark.
Somewhere cold, damp, dim and hidden.
I felt so lost.
Your memories glittered against unsure walls.
Emerging from the cave like structure,
It rains static pools of velvet memories.
That skim the surface of your unseen reality.
I woke up in someones soul.
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2004-06-11 21:48:57]
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Re: Wakeing up in some one's soul.
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by imaginary on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 10:05:55 PM AEST
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I really like the idea of this poem and its really well written.
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Re: Wakeing up in some one's soul.
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by pixie on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 10:54:20 AM AEST
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wow, you have great style
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Re: Wakeing up in some one's soul.
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