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Everytime

Contributed by holderofthestone on Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 09:21:39 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



everytime I close my eyes
I only see your face
everytime I bite my lip
I only get your taste
everytime I try to run
you tie me to the ground
everytime I reached for your hand
you always pushed me down
everytime I think of you
it makes me miss you more
everytime I picture you
I see a closing door
everytime I swore to you
you'd be my one and only
everytime you ignored me
intending to leave me lonely
everytime I tried to change
to be a better man
everytime I begged of you
you never gave a damn
everytime I try to forget
to just let you fade away
everytime I fail
just like every other day....




Copyright © holderofthestone ... [ 2004-06-11 21:21:39]
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Re: Everytime (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 09:25:34 PM AEST
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i can relate to this. excellent write always.
everytime the ink flows the greatness shows, a lame rhyme to brighten your day.


Re: Everytime (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 09:36:18 PM AEST
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Oh holder - I do like this one very much! The opening is incredible - those first four lines could stand alone and would be plenty. This flows beautifully and... as so often happens with your poetry... leaves me feeling heavy hearted. Beautiful. Truly.

Sighing -
SNM


Re: Everytime (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 09:39:43 PM AEST
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I relate...I know I relate to a lot of your poems...lol but still I love your work I cant stop reading lol their so powerful the wording its great I thought this one...very emotional...great work....
much love,
Dani
xoxoxo


Re: Everytime (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 09:48:10 PM AEST
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I guess everyone can or will relate to this sometime in their life. It brought back memories of when I had these very same thoughts. It is deeply distressing when you live it. You are an excellent writer. I will watch more closely.

Rita


Re: Everytime (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 10:00:07 PM AEST
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a most touching write lovely flow
michelle


Re: Everytime (User Rating: 1 )
by Chimo on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 01:04:46 AM AEST
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That's cool


Re: Everytime (User Rating: 1 )
by InnerBeautyQueen on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 02:46:05 AM AEST
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//everytime I think of you
it makes me miss you more//

very good! those are my favorite lines


Re: Everytime (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 10:55:15 AM AEST
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A trully great write

pixie xx



Re: Everytime (User Rating: 1 )
by xSlashXPrettyXSkinx on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 04:42:01 PM AEST
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Very well written. Great job.

Lindsey


Re: Everytime (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 05:38:48 PM AEST
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powerfully packed well woven wrords into an excellent and beautiful poem:) hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-


Re: Everytime (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfwynd on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 05:51:18 PM AEST
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I can relate to this completely, its how I feel right now and reading this has brought back memories and feelings - great write!


Re: Everytime (User Rating: 1 )
by wray on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 09:13:02 AM AEST
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everytime I reached for your hand
you always pushed me down

I like how you incorporate the mixed feelings of love/longing/despair here. I never realised before, but everytime is quite a powerful word.


Re: Everytime (User Rating: 1 )
by SweetRhythm on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 09:24:27 AM AEST
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Awh whoa you can almost feel your pain. Can relate very much to your sentiments. Excellent write, I enjoyed it immensely. Beautiful heart grabbing peace of work. Thanks for sharing.
Corinna


Re: Everytime (User Rating: 1 )
by Calista on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 01:46:31 AM AEST
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holder, holder, holder. are you capable of anything less than beautiful? as i have said before, i am in love with your writing. this is a very special piece. bittersweet. thank you,
~Calista


Re: Everytime (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 11:24:25 PM AEST
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I am growing more and more fond of your writing. Lovely write, you used wonderful words to weave emotion into this write. :)




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