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What Never Was
Contributed by
essentially9
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Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 08:55:42 PM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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What Never Was
I've lost my mind
I'm out of sight
I can't remember anything
Not even the last time
That I loved you
Or loved anything
I'm better off
Not knowing
And losing what's mine
And giving you
Your life back
Not trying to stand in the way
And let you pass me by
Without so much as a glance
Towards what never was
And I'm lost in space in time
Thought I was more lost
In my mind
But I know I'm wrong now
Just as before
Always wrong and even now
I can't be anything
Without failing
I can't be anything
Without succeeding
I can't be anything
I've stopped trying
When I realized
I deserved nothing in life
And I leave it at that
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essentially9
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2004-06-11 20:55:42]
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Re: What Never Was
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by holderofthestone on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 09:03:16 PM AEST
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| I feel you on this one, its that almost empty feeling for me.... very strong, great poem! A++++ |
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Re: What Never Was
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by emystar on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 09:08:30 PM AEST
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Very sad but written well.
Jus cut loose and be yourself and u will find your own inner beauty as your talent is great and we certainly could write an eternity and never find the end of luv.
Good job here and please hang tuff 'cause we r all un deserving but the beauty in it all is God's luv for all.
luv, huggs, faith, hope, strength,
emy |
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Re: What Never Was
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by TheVoice on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 09:13:28 PM AEST
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never lost, just on a different path.
never wrong, just thinking different than the crowd.
great piece.
my thoughts are with you.
the voice
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Re: What Never Was
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by pixie on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 10:56:48 AM AEST
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This was great, very well expressed
pixie xx |
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Re: What Never Was
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by Archie on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 02:29:27 AM AEST
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| It is okay to stand at the cross roads of life so long as you don't stay too long. Self stuggle should end in the realisation of truth and not the breeding of bitterness. That is why I like this poem. |
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