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control
Contributed by
insane_outsider
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Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 08:17:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Im the one that's in control,
it's time you learned your role,
you haven't won,
your win is my games, my fun...
when you win, im sorry to say,
i gain practice and experiance that way,
you might win the battle,
but you're a simple maze on my golden rattle.
Play it once, play it twice and three times
soon it seems the win is mine,
my secret? i won't tell you,
you might learn something too.
I give you credit, your not so dumb,
it's really all those things you've done,
with this knowalge i've obtained,
here i go, now watch me change.
oh, but you wont,
you'll be too busy in your gloat,
some day i'll beat you with ease,
and when it comes, remember the grin on my face as your chin falls to your knees.
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Re: control
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 09:40:54 PM AEST
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| great write. i can relate to this one on many levels. |
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Re: control
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by TheVoice on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 09:45:58 PM AEST
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to have control makes people do the meanest things.
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Re: control
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by pixie on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 10:58:17 AM AEST
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well done, this was a great poem
pixie xx |
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