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true to me
Contributed by
veruca
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Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 06:28:24 PM in AEST
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my heart lies about love
but it can not defeat the power of love
so everytime i see you
my hart beats fast
fast with love that is not true to me
but you see light
light at the end of our world
i will not imagin this
for you are not true to me
i am true to you
but not the same for me
your love is intense
i can not fight it
so now i love you the same as you love me
together forever we shall stay
for we are true to each other
Copyright ©
veruca
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2004-06-11 18:28:24]
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Re: true to me
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by KSUHO11 on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 07:01:19 PM AEST
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Pretty good poem, I was a little confused about it. I was also wondering if you could tell me were you got the idea for your name Veruca. Thanks.
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Re: true to me
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by BrandySwanson on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 07:17:42 PM AEST
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nice read, great work. i too was a little confused but after reading it twice i understood it better.
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