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Fighter
Contributed by
pixie
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Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 05:29:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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You made me what I am today,
Thanks for the hurt you put my way,
It made me determined to not let you win,
I know I can survive through thick and thin.
You wanted me to admit defeat,
Hide away in some closed off retreat,
But NO I am one of life’s survivors,
I am not letting you be one of my deprivers.
What didn’t kill me made me stronger,
I can now hold on for so much longer,
Whereas before I’d experienced heartache,
My soul was much more easy to break.
I will fight until the bitter end,
Words of thanks and gratitude I send,
To you the reason for my iron will,
You’d have loved to see me pop those pills.
Then my friend you would have won,
And my demise would have begun,
But this time I turned it all around,
Picked myself up from the ground.
Everyday I live and breathe,
It is another day that you can’t believe,
That it is I who defeated you,
And this time there is nothing you can do.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-06-11 17:29:57]
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Re: Fighter
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by Silent-No-More on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 06:00:01 PM AEST
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| Hoorah! Pixie --- Very positive and inspirational. Ah... there's always someone that will try to beat you down... but... they can't touch your soul if you don't let them. Kudos to you for standing strong! Nicely done! |
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Re: Fighter
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 06:06:40 PM AEST
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Great write....and attitude... I feel the same....
Jenni |
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Re: Fighter
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by yellow_sundragon on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 06:13:44 PM AEST
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Man I don't remember who, but some "great man" once said that you can't be defeated by anyone else unless you first defeat yourself....
Great write, and I know I was there, so... thanks for sharing...
Jaime |
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Re: Fighter
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by RhythmBndt on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 06:30:02 PM AEST
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| A billion times better than Xtina's "Fighter" !!! :-D |
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Re: Fighter
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 06:30:57 PM AEST
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wow..atta girl Pixie. This has such power in it.
very well done
Roses
Larry |
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Re: Fighter
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by KSUHO11 on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 06:36:30 PM AEST
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| It reads like rhyming and making it so sound so good and fluent are like the easiest things in the world to do for you. You've got a mad crazy talent, don't let up. Be a bad ass |
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Re: Fighter
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by Princesaazul16 on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 08:02:42 PM AEST
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Pixie - you are so true. What doesn't kill us only makes us stronger. Once again you took my breath away when I read this. I loved it. Keep up the good work, once again. This poem should be the anthem to life and bad relationships! I loved it.
~Stace~ |
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Re: Fighter
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 09:52:16 PM AEST
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| brilliant piece. |
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Re: Fighter
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by loveisendless on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 11:38:37 PM AEST
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YOU GO GIRL & KICK SOME ASS! LET THE IDIOT KEEP ON THINKING WHY,HOW!! FOR YOUR NOBODIES FOOL & YOUR WARRIOR HEART WILL FOREVER RULE!!! I LOVED IT,
PIXIE!!!!
LOL~DAN!!!!! |
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Re: Fighter
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 02:55:51 PM AEST
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this is brilliant, so very true, an excellent poem:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Fighter
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 03:29:59 PM AEST
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NICE! strong words. To you the reason for my iron will,
You’d have loved to see me pop those pills.
- I like these lines. well written. perfect flow A++++ |
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