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Life of yesterday, Death of today
Contributed by
apollo
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Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 01:26:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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My heart is tied in knots
my eyes flow with tears
although I have my friends and family
I feel as if I'm not here.
My wrists are uncut
my body unbruised
yet my mind, soul, and heart
beat a continuous blue.
I do not know if this is the end of things
if my life will wisp away.
The only thing I am thankful for
is being here today.
Copyright ©
apollo
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2004-06-11 13:26:57]
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Re: Life of yesterday, Death of today
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by purplestary on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 01:30:39 PM AEST
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| nice write. i like the way it ends. |
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Re: Life of yesterday, Death of today
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by arden on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 01:46:32 PM AEST
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i really liked this. alot of deep meaning and dark emotion in this. like the other comment, i liked how it ended.
greatly done, keep it up.
Arden |
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Re: Life of yesterday, Death of today
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by Princesaazul16 on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 01:52:24 PM AEST
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Beautiful. I loved it. A lot of people can understand how you feel. If you ever need any one to talk to ...i'm here. Keep up the good work. And hang in there.
~Stace~ |
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Re: Life of yesterday, Death of today
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by waos on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 10:21:47 PM AEST
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| it's really good to be thankful for today. that's something i'm working on. good job writing. the pain inside is the hardest kind. |
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Re: Life of yesterday, Death of today
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 11:03:49 PM AEST
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I take it that either your medication is not working or you are not taking it? Life doesn't have to be so difficult all the time. I do hope someone will help. I am encouraged by your attitude of thankfulness for your friends and family and appreciation of life. Go forward.
Rita |
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Re: Life of yesterday, Death of today
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by Archie on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 11:52:28 AM AEST
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| Simplicity is a good thing; the simple things that I am thankful for often bring me from the depths of my depression. This is a good write. |
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Re: Life of yesterday, Death of today
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by Avarice_Riot on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 03:01:30 AM AEST
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| Hello Brandon, thanks a lot for commenting on my poems. I like this piece a lot, there is much depth and emotion here. Definitely looking forward to reading more from ya. |
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