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If Thou Shall Die Before Thee
Contributed by
deviled_brat_4_u
on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 12:37:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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If thou shall die before thee
To face the road alone
You'll always be beside me
In the wind I hear your moan
Everybreath the you have taken
Everything that you have eaten
Shall follow in my footsteps
As my heart remains A beatin
If thou shall die before thee
The path you made I follow
Everything that you have left for me
Shall always remain hollow
If you shall die before thee
And sleep the big long sleep
In the future I lay next to you
We both not make a peep
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2004-06-11 12:37:42]
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Re: If Thou Shall Die Before Thee
(User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 12:40:13 PM AEST
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This is beautiful, great poem
pixie xx |
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Re: If Thou Shall Die Before Thee
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 01:21:26 PM AEST
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I liked the effort - but want to point out that Thou and Thee are the same thing.
Perhaps you could change the thee to me... |
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Re: If Thou Shall Die Before Thee
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 01:27:16 PM AEST
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I liked this and I think you have great potential.
There is a great idea behind this write. Keep writing my friend :o)
Larry |
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