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poison
Contributed by
dolly_dagger
on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 12:17:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Make me a glass
And brew it strong
I want to feel
Like nothing's wrong
Push the glass against my lips
I'll drink and feel my conscious slip
Away with the air from my pierced lungs
Rushing ancient melodies sung
To lullaby me to the roots
I feel the liquid arrows shoot
To sleep me 'til it's all OK
Prepared to wake on my next day
Where the sun will shine
And I am free
From the ropes that presently strangle me
I don't like to lose control
But in this dream
I'd still be whole...
I'd be like I think I used to be:
Able to laugh and act passionately,
Because right now, I feel so bound
To all this consequence I have found
On the next level I wish to be
Able to play and think like 'Me'
Without this pressure we're suffering from
My sanity's been stretched far too long...
'Regime so intense is unnatural!'
I shout from the back of my exam hall
But no-one hears
With brainwashed ears...
I say
All work
And no joy
Makes this Dolly
A dull toy
So Dolly will sip
Until Dolly may fly
Where she waves from the clouds
As the fools live a lie.
Copyright ©
dolly_dagger
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2004-06-11 12:17:20]
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Re: poison
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 12:26:26 PM AEST
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ooooooooooo i really like this! good sence of what its like. damn gcses! dont worry tho hun they'll alll be over soon. =)
-j x x x x x |
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Re: poison
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by pixie on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 12:29:35 PM AEST
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Wow, this was amazing, great work Dolly
pixie xx |
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Re: poison
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by deviled_brat_4_u on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 12:43:17 PM AEST
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| Oh I loved it!! Brilliant! |
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Re: poison
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by purplestary on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 01:08:12 PM AEST
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| great write!!!! loved this alot. |
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Re: poison
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by Destiny on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 02:23:20 PM AEST
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| Wow..I can't really explain how I feel about this, it's great. |
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Re: poison
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by Rhei76 on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 05:06:47 PM AEST
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| I like this alot. And I remenesse How I used to swallow down those cups of moorshaid. (You know what I mean?) Well your colorful writting had me thinking of younger daze, when all I could do to feel good was to drink that and feel like you said. Great Poem. Take care girl. |
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Re: poison
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 05:46:52 PM AEST
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See? You do have a strong voice!
This poem is absolutely magnificent - your voice flows very well through these words, and it is as impressive as warrant me reading this over four or five times already.
*Bows*
'Tis exemplary, Ma'am.
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Re: poison
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by little_genna on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 04:43:55 AM AEST
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wow ellie this is one of your best poems that i have read. tis a shame that tis so sad. yet as always you have a way with your words to make them hit a person in the right place.well done
love ya
stace xxx |
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Re: poison
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by deviled_brat_4_u on
Saturday, 26th January 2008 @ 03:23:55 PM AEST
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| I come back and read this poem everytime I'm feeling like crap. It just always has a tendency to sum up my feelings. Thanks :D |
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