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Walls
Contributed by
dragonluvsong
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Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 08:31:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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There are walls surrouding me.
Are they keeping me in?
Are they keeping others out?
I am alone in my cell.
I cannot see through to the outside.
I cannot watch life go on around me.
Whenever I try to see, the wall is a mirror, all I see is my own refelction.
The walls dissapear when someone is near.
I can see them, hear them talk; and I yearn to interat with the rest of society.
But they walk away, and I am imprisoned once again.
I could not sum up the courage to interact with them.
My cell becomes a tomb.
I am suffocating, the walls closing in around me.
Claustraphobia, panice pain.
I feel the pressure against my body.
I am being crushed by the weight of my own insecurity.
The walls continue to close in, and I am compressed into an infinitesimal speck.
I hear a voice coming near, he doesn't see me...
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Re: Walls
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by Rhei76 on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 09:02:50 AM AEST
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| Great poem. I can refference my own emotions by your words. You're doing a good job. Take care. |
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Re: Walls
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by pixie on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 09:25:28 AM AEST
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This is such a dark and powerful poem, you described the feelings of being trapped and the pain well,
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: Walls
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by LiquidChaos on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 09:51:45 AM AEST
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::sigh:: this is how many of us live our everyday lives...trapped behind a wall of fear. you've done a great job describing it. don't give up, you can break down your wall!
keep writing!
addie |
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