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STORM
Contributed by
arakrune
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Tuesday, 15th October 2002 @ 08:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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STORM
Darkening clouds rise in the west
Sent of rain
Old injuries pain
Tonight Mother Nature gives a test
Thunder rumbles down the mountain
The hill side groans
You feel it in your bones
This is not a night for the sane
THUNDER CRASHES!!!!!!!!!
WINDOWS SHATTER
WINDS BATTER
WATER SMASHES
The green mother has struck
She chooses at random
She hits like a bomb
She cares not of your luck
STR
10-14-02
9:43PM
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2002-10-15 20:30:00]
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Re: STORM
(User Rating: 1 )
by Daniel on
Wednesday, 16th October 2002 @ 06:16:55 AM AEST
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| lovely mother earth is out coming to get anyone who crosses her path now? that's a scary thought! but this write is nifty, i like your style. short but sweet, and the thunder crashing capital chorus thingy... it reminds me of the old batman series with the BOOM and the KAPOW that have become quite likeable to people nowadays. it is the same with this thing you wrote: quite likeable. hope the green mother doesn't get me anytime soon... kudos! ;0) -daniel |
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Re: STORM
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by arakrune on
Wednesday, 16th October 2002 @ 10:37:02 AM AEST
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| ty i think lol |
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