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Everlasting
Contributed by
jt
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Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 08:08:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Everlasting pain
Scars that will never heal cant be seen
They are buried too deep in the mind
Hiding. Waiting
For the moment most awkward
When they can replenish themselves
Everlasting memories
Memories that can never be forgotten
Imprinted so firmly in the mind
Hiding. Waiting
For someone to release them
Causing anguish and turmoil
Everlasting rage
A rage so harsh that it cant be ignored
Under so much pressure in the mind
Hiding. Waiting
For a fault to release the power
And end all problems within
Everlasting hate
Hate like that of no other
Too strong. Too powerful
Just hiding. Waiting
For a moment of truth
Where the lies become real
Everlasting death
Death enveloped in darkness
That cant be penetrated
There is no light at the end of my tunnel
No hiding. No waiting
Just nothing lasting forever
Till the end of my eternity
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jt
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2004-06-11 08:08:47]
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Re: Everlasting
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by LiquidChaos on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 08:19:25 AM AEST
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Interesting phrasing and format, although the emotion is extremely powerful. I can completely identify. The beginning kinda reminds me of a Linkin Park song...
Great write! Keep it up and hang in there!
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Re: Everlasting
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 02:43:21 PM AEST
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beautiful expression of feelings. keep writing! hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Everlasting
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by New_York_Chick on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 07:12:00 AM AEST
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"They are buried too deep in the mind"
isn't it funny how the worst pain is not physical
loved the poem
thnx for commenting on mine =] |
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