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innocently beautiful, yet not enough
Contributed by
little_genna
on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 04:15:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Does what I feel come into your mind.
If it doesn't you must be blind.
Just the thought of us only ever being mates,
Never to make it to a first date.
This is not the normal me.
So how can this even be.
You make me crazy with feeling
I felt as if you gave me more meaning.
Friends I said we would stay.
Life is one big stage, so lets see the play.
Oh sorry I meant lets see my life
My tongue seems to be as sharp as a knief.
As usual the guy has played me
Why do I always let this happen to me?
Its about time things changed.
Its about time I changed.
Im too sweet to you damn guys.
I have that oh so innocent look in my eyes.
Yet you don't know what goes through my mind.
Believe me, its nothing sweet or kind.
Take a real look at me,
What do you see?
The sadness and pain in my eyes?
Or do you just see me hiding behind lies?
I have very little meaning of self.
Not as beautiful as an elf.
What happened to my innocence.
Hiding behind its pretense.
Why does my poetry always seem full of sadness.
Coming from nothing more than badness.
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2004-06-11 04:15:18]
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Re: innocently beautiful, yet not enough
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by SweetRhythm on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 06:56:08 AM AEST
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Great write, I enjoyed it immensely. I can relate to a lot of your feelings. I really enjoyed this poem. It brought a lot of memories rushing back to mind. Very real. I loved it.
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Re: innocently beautiful, yet not enough
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by JT on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 07:56:20 AM AEST
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great write. nice flow. lots of emotion behind those eyes. keep writing
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Re: innocently beautiful, yet not enough
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by wyrd_faerie on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 10:32:40 AM AEST
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| beautiful title...great poem...so sad... |
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