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She WAS, she DID, she MEANT & he LOVED
Contributed by
Another_Dimension
on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 03:15:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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You,
WERE
a big part of his life.
And you
MEANT,
a lot to him.
Yes; you
DID,
i know very well.
It
TORTURED
me for a while,
but then i
MANAGED
to get my head straight,
and i
REALISED
that you
WERE
no longer
anything to him,
at all.
I
GOT
so upset and
HURT,
but i
DECIDED
that i love him to much to ever let go.
You
HURT
him so much,
but the pains no longer there,
because my love is.
You
PLAGUED
me so much,
but now i just don't care;
because love has no limits
no boundaries,
no stopping points,
and the love that you
HAD
no longer exists.
now the lies have been
'FILTERED'
and my soul can now rest,
because I'm more than sure,
that my heart is in the right place.
You
DID
mean a lot to him,
You
WERE
a big part of his life,
and I'm aware you
MEANT
a lot;
also.
[....past-tense....]
{....past-tense....}
(....past-tense....)
He
REGRETED
that night,
and he still does
regret.
Like he regrets
and doubts
the fact
he ever
LOVED
you.
[....past-tense....]
{....past-tense....}
(....past-tense....)
And now the tormenter
becomes the tormented
and the truth is let out of it's cage
now the presenter
becomes the presented
I have let of the last of my rage
Copyright ©
Another_Dimension
... [
2004-06-11 03:15:34]
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Re: She WAS, she DID, she MEANT & he LOVED
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 04:12:46 AM AEST
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wow that was very powerful, great write very emotional and full of feeling!!!
read and comment my stuff if you want, i'd love to hear what you think...
much love,
Dani
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Re: She WAS, she DID, she MEANT & he LOVED
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by little_genna on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 04:39:18 AM AEST
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i just love the whole structure of this poem it is so powerful. well done!!
feel free to read my poems
love and hugs
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