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conclusion
Contributed by
hannahbanana
on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 02:22:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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jumping
conclusions come here
i beckon you
to tell me what i fear
where does he sleep
and where does he dream
cos suspicion mounts
in the empty side of my bed
when he's out on the tiles
and i'm pacing mine
is he loving her
or missing me
i'm jumping
to and fro
between
and hoping
for anything
other than realising
conclusion.
Copyright ©
hannahbanana
... [
2004-06-11 02:22:56]
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Re: conclusion
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 02:32:21 AM AEST
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Very interesting style as it's wide at top then narrow and wide again sortta like an upside down Sand timmer.
Very ggood writing.
huggs, luv,
emy |
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Re: conclusion
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by holderofthestone on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 02:52:01 AM AEST
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| I agree nice style very creative. strong poem good wording. |
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