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lonely
Contributed by
hannahbanana
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Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 02:18:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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it's a beautiful day outside
in here
the cats scream their miaows
through a broken window of time
wipe tears and rise
old bones are slow and lonely
without the warmth of an embrace
only feline friends
for company
she waits and watches
the cracked sun fade.
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hannahbanana
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2004-06-11 02:18:14]
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Re: lonely
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by holderofthestone on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 02:53:26 AM AEST
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| descriptive. short but gets the message across. good write. |
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Re: lonely
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by pixie on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 08:46:32 AM AEST
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I like short poems, as my concentration sometimes just dissapears lol
great poem
pixie xx |
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