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Flaming Hope
Contributed by
JennyFruFru
on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 11:03:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I saw a little light today
Perhaps it was my flame
It burned for many hours despite all of the rain
It danced and galloped freely
It melted harden hearts
Its smoke drifted very far from here
but yet it did not part
It had a burning of desire
yet fought away my fears
it took away my petty worries that had gathered all these years
It made my cheeks all rosy
and provided such a glow
That even on the darkest days it showed me a rainbow
I watched for many hours
I then watched for many days
Praying that my flame would not be taken by the rain
Its still burning at this moment
I hope that your flame is burning too
and if your flame has vanished
I'll share my flame with you!
Copyright ©
JennyFruFru
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2004-06-10 23:03:43]
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Re: Flaming Hope
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by matts_sweetie_04 on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 11:10:56 PM AEST
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I really liked this poem. It is sweet and heart warming.
Very good write. |
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Re: Flaming Hope
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 11:30:47 PM AEST
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Hey sweet pea. I do agree with you. We all need a little flame buring all the time that is ready to flare when needed. Without our flame we get too complacent and forget our usefulness to the rest of the world. This is a great write. I am so proud of you.
Hugs sweetie,
Rita |
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Re: Flaming Hope
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by venkat on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 12:54:00 AM AEST
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wonderful expression of hope..heart warming and very pleasant read..:-)
venkat |
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Re: Flaming Hope
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by loveisendless on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 12:59:51 AM AEST
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VERY INSPIRING! SELF MOTIVATING & HELPS OPEN YOUR EYES!! THE LAST 4 LINES WERE SO SWEET!!! GREAT ONE TO GO CARVED IN ONES HEART JENNY!!!!
LOL~DAN!!!!! |
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Re: Flaming Hope
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by TheSchroedmeister on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 02:52:22 AM AEST
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| This really hit the spot today. I love to hear about this hope that I often forget, especially in a writing such as this. Thank you for this magnificent piece. |
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Re: Flaming Hope
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 03:00:06 AM AEST
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With thanks to TheSchroed for pointing this out in the poem-of-the-day forum, I must say I found this a charming write!
Really well written and uplifting.
Thanks for writing, Jenny! |
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Re: Flaming Hope
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 06:09:49 AM AEST
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Beautifully uplifting, Jen with a 'y'....
Loved this..
Jenni with the 'i'... |
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Re: Flaming Hope
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by blueheart on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 11:36:49 AM AEST
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| I'm so glad my attention was brought to this poem. Beautifully crafted. Amazing write. |
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Re: Flaming Hope
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 11:45:58 AM AEST
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delightfully sweet:) beautifully written, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Flaming Hope
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 01:41:40 AM AEST
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Girl u got it going on with this write.
It's full of flame-n-luv.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Flaming Hope
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by loveisendless on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 12:12:33 PM AEST
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THAT WAS EXCELLENT! YOU DID A GREAT JOB ON THIS ONE!! I CAN TELL YOU'RE NOT GREEDY BUT WHAT YOU SAID IN THE END!!! THANK GOD!!!! ANY WAYS I LOVED IT!!!!!
LOL~DAN!!!!!! |
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Re: Flaming Hope
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 05:33:45 AM AEST
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Thanks for that. You know i'm sat in the library using a public computer and it's blowing a gale outside, and i was just getting annoyed with myself for not wearing a coat. Now after reading your poem it doesn't seem to matter anymore. A beautiful piece of work.
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