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My Mistake
Contributed by
Lovely_4_Steve
on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 10:52:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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It's a rainy night tonight.
I long to see you, but your no where around.
The pain bottled up inside me is unbearable just ripping and thrashing inside of me.
I cannot stand it any longer!
I long to cut deep into my skin leave this world full of hate.
You try to catch me as a fall, but you msis by an inch, maybe all along you where to far gone to notice what was happening inside of me.
By pushing me to do this, you see me crash to the ground and tumble down this vast of a hill.
Thinking oh god what have I done now as I roll down the hill.
The world spinning, me leaving I hit the bottom of the hill.
Everything goes black I hear the sounds of ragid breathing near me, I hear screams and cries.
I wish to open my eyes, I can't the pain in my heart is holding me down.
Everything is so unclear!
I cry out wanting to come back, I made a mistake.
I promised I wouldn't leave!
I think as I try to make everything come into focus.
I try to lift up my head and open my eyes,
but I realize I'm about to die.
I whimper at the thought.
I have no knowledge of how I could do this to you.
I promised you everything!
I promised you I wouldn't leave..
I close my eyes and drift away, letting the cold current of death take me away.
I wake up in a white room...
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Lovely_4_Steve
... [
2004-06-10 22:52:51]
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Re: My Mistake
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by Jishes_4_ever on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 11:59:05 AM AEST
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This was a good poem..... keep up the good work
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Re: My Mistake
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by saveMEfromMYSELF on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 03:40:42 PM AEST
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| Nice poem. Very discriptive. Second chances are things many want these days. Let's just hope the road fate dives you on doesn't end before you get to an intersection. |
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