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Waited Too Long

Contributed by shadowed on Tuesday, 15th October 2002 @ 08:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I am lost in a sea of bitter-sweet drunkenness
The cloudy fog has made its way to my eyes
I can't see! I have been blinded
To all that is good, real, concrete
It is just a mere illusion.
These things I see, feel, desire
All just add to that buzz
If only I could stay clean
Like I have for soooo many years
But it gets harder, because I have found
my drink of choice.
Its proof way beyond any of those on the same shelf.
Although it's flavor has not reached my lips
And yet I know, just from it's fragrance,
that it is the drink for me.
Just the aroma, gets me high
And in my drunken stupper, I feel only joy
A beverage with such potency as this I have never
found before.
Now it is all I crave. Night and Day
A buzz this great begets its downs
The hangovers it can cause are great as well
So many have felt such a pain as this,
although few have tasted.
But it can only be assumed that it is worth
the sacrafice,
Because this brand is so sought after.
You might think of this as the ultimate
flavorful liquor.
But alas, I fear I will never have the pleasure of the total
intoxication feeling,
That such a drink may possess.
For this drink that I desire.
Is in the hand on another...

Copyright © shadowed ... [ 2002-10-15 20:00:00]
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Re: Waited Too Long (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 11:03:39 PM AEST
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fantastic write.

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