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Betrayed
Contributed by
essentially9
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Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 10:38:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Betrayed
If I could've known
This wouldn't happen
To us both
But it's too late now
I can't rewind life
I can't keep playing on
But I have to
We were building
From the destruction
Of the last scene
Rebuilding everything
Except the foundation
Our foundation crumbles
Can't build anything on deceit
We've tried already
We should know better
Our foundation crumbles
I should've known
From the beginning
Truth is my worst enemy
I made an alliance with deceit
To accomplish happiness
The tinted lies have faded away
To give me my worst feeling
I feel betrayed
I did it by myself
I feel betrayed
I'm emptied of feeling
My worst enemy
Is the only thing worth having
It's not meant to fight me
Can't build anything on deceit
Can't be anything pretending
Deceit is our downfall
Truth is the only thing left
To save me from my enemy
Myself
Truth is the only thing left
To save you from your enemy
Yourself
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essentially9
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2004-06-10 22:38:15]
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Re: Betrayed
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by pixie on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 08:35:24 AM AEST
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Very emotional and a great write
pixie xx |
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Re: Betrayed
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by Archie on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 02:25:03 AM AEST
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| A very honest write. I am very impressed! |
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