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you know I'm not good at this...
Contributed by
Living_In_My_Dream
on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 10:17:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I sit alone and wonder why
how I ever let you say good-bye
you were why Im me
you see...you made me real, you made me free
This burning passion is burning right through
I'm tryng to hold on and not forget you
you held me every night
you made things perfect
made things feel right
It was hard you know I hate good-byes
but still you insisted and,
brought tears to my eyes
I tried, tried to fight the pain
but I was standing there left out in the rain
if only you'd stop and and see
if you'd stay how your life could be
I'd be there every waking moment
just to hear your slow breaths
I'd wake at your side
and see your morning stretch
I'd be there every morning for you...
just to hear what you dreamt about
i guess it's over
everything I thought was real
I hate feeling pain, I hate seeing others cry
if its for other reasons just tell me why
please, please just turn around
and why the tears form my eyes
I love you so much
but I'm not so good at saying good-byes
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Re: you know I'm not good at this...
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 10:39:13 PM AEST
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Beautifully touching.....
Jenni |
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Re: you know I'm not good at this...
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by holderofthestone on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 01:16:32 AM AEST
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| feel lucky you got goodbye.... this is a touching poem, most likely because you know I relate to it. well written A++++ |
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Re: you know I'm not good at this...
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by pixie on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 08:32:42 AM AEST
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Beautifully written poem,
5/5
pixie xx |
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