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Daydreaming
Contributed by
hobbitess
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Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 10:02:33 PM in AEST
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Daydreaming.
I thought I’d sit and write awhile about my future plans
Consider it a personal add of ‘what I want in a man’
He must be sweet and tender and should love me always true
He must be kind and honest and love everything I do.
I’m sure it doesn’t sound like much but wait there’s more she said
He also must be brave and strong, and of course very well read
Intelligence but not too much I don’t want a know-it-all
A romantic who’ll read poems to me and catch me when I fall
The most important thing of all one I cannot be without
His love of animals great and small for I have a few about
Of course it would be good if he was a vetenarian
And even better still if he was a vegetarian
Now I have some insecurities which he must overlook
That bit of extra weight put on because he’s such a great cook!
If you’re out there please do not reply because the man I seek
Is modest so he would not know he’s the one I desire to meet.
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Re: Daydreaming
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 10:08:54 PM AEST
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:>) Welcome to YPDC...the best poetry site on the net...
I really enjoyed this poem....and I think your poetry will be well liked here at this site...
Best of luck in your quest...lol
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Re: Daydreaming
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by matts_sweetie_04 on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 11:35:10 PM AEST
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| Hehe. I really liked this poem! Dont worry about it being your first time posting cause you did a great job on your poem. Hope you like this site and hope to see more of your poems! |
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Re: Daydreaming
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 11:42:30 PM AEST
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Well, I think this is precious. Very similar to the type of an I like. But he better love steak cuz I am from Texas and we eat meat. Welcome to the family. I think you will love it. I know I do.
Rita |
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Re: Daydreaming
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by pixie on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 08:30:16 AM AEST
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Great poem, for a first posting, welcome to the site, as Jenni said this is the best poetry site on the net, the people on here are so welcoming, honest and friendly
takecare and hope to read more from you
pixie xx |
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Re: Daydreaming
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 07:00:34 PM AEST
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Welcome toYPDC!!!
This is adorable! I really like the flow, and the message of what your saying. Keep on writing and posting!
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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