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Pirate's Cove
Contributed by
liquidsunshine
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Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 07:36:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Pirate's Cove
A pirate will die for his treasure
And quarreling gives him much pleasure
A swashbuckle here
A dead buccaneer
But death is not great enough measure
A flag flies atop of their ship
The captain, you'll give him no lip
Just for foolish pride
So many have died
And yet not a tear drop will drip
They live an adventurous life
For they thrive on danger and strife
They won't settle down
And always they frown
No wonder there's no pirate's wife
I live my life out and it's full
And I won't take none of that bull
A pirate can sail
He'll moan and he'll wail
But it's his own weight that he'll pull
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Re: Pirate's Cove
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by holderofthestone on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 08:11:14 PM AEST
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| Nice poem. I like the flow to it. creative and a good read. A+++ |
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Re: Pirate's Cove
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by hobbitess on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 10:38:47 PM AEST
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| Your too hard on yourself. I liked this one it is lighthearted and it flows well, I could picture a group of pirates singing it heartily like a sea shanty. Good work. |
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Re: Pirate's Cove
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 01:00:46 AM AEST
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Aw... c'mon Chelsea, haven't you ever heard of captain Jack Sparrow?
Nice work, as ever. Savvy?
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Re: Pirate's Cove
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 01:09:29 AM AEST
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aye matey, this poem is enchanting, brilliant, and clever!! hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Pirate's Cove
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by liquidsunshine on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 09:28:06 AM AEST
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| I wrote this before I'd ever heard of Captain Jack Sparrow... But he's an oddball anyway. |
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