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All Of Me
Contributed by
Sirena_Degana
on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 05:31:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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It's more then just love and sensual stuff.
It's a physical love that stirs the fire deep within.
It makes my skin grow hot,
my cheeks flush red,
it makes me want to
move, dance, jump
into his arms.
Have him take all of me,
not just a part of me.
I want him to fill me,
complete me,
make me whole.
Once you start,
you won't want to stop.
You want to
scream, shout, cry out loud...
It's more then just love and sensual stuff.
It's a powerful love, that wakes all of me.
Takes all of me.
Copyright ©
Sirena_Degana
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2004-06-10 17:31:54]
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Re: All Of Me
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by pixie on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 05:49:52 PM AEST
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wow I really loved this one, please continue writing like this :)
pixie xx |
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Re: All Of Me
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by ltv on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 08:49:53 PM AEST
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I really like the last two lines. The internal rhyme works well as does the imagery.
Did you intend to use the word then instead of than in the first and seventeenth lines? Just wondering. |
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Re: All Of Me
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by venkat on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 04:45:16 AM AEST
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| Aaah..what a sweet beauty you are..that is the "Rhythm of Love". thanks for sharing . venkat |
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