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Black Days

Contributed by DerPinguin44 on Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 05:19:43 PM in AEST
Topic: mystical

Now Black Rose,
Saw these days.
Strong, yet tender,
Red once more.
Carried by the
Black Dragon

Black Dragon,
Saw those days.
Strong, not tender,
Evil once more.
Carrying the
Now Black Rose.

Now Black Days,
Saw those beings.
Powerful and feared,
Coming for you.
Carried on wings of evil,
Bloody by the thorn.

Copyright Â© DerPinguin44 ... [ 2004-06-10 17:19:43]
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Re: Black Days (User Rating: 1 )
by Ethereal_Engine on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 05:32:59 PM AEST
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This is very...vague and leaves a lot up to the reader to interpret its meaning. I like to take things literally...so if I’m completely wrong, I don’t care Ill have fun writing it lol. A Black Dragon carrying a young warrior girl named Black Rose, travels across an annihilated world that her and the dragon created, but once all was wrecked she felt guilt and sadness for what she did and left the dragon for awhile to wander the planet attempting consolation to the survivors, who don’t know that the world they live in was crafted by the woman that stands before them. She soon finds that these few left living are just as destructive, ignorant, selfish, and evil as they were before the world ended. This angers Black Rose beyond anything she felt before. The rage is only fed further by her previous guilt, "to think that I felt bad for these people, who maim each other for sheer enjoyment, who wreak havoc beyond what was already done, who destroy the last remnants of peace and continue to wage war with one another, this was suppose to teach them a lesson, to bring them together, to make them realize they need to change, but no, they'll never change, and for that they don’t deserve to have the precious life that they were given" and with that thought she returns to the dragon with rekindled anger and travels the planet on the back of the Black Dragon systematically wiping out all humans that are left standing.....Congratulations you inspired a story to be born...I’m gonna post this. Thank you for your inspirational poem ^^. Ill be sure to mention your name.

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