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pendulum
Contributed by
Luinil
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Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 03:46:54 PM in AEST
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Clocks chiming
ticking seconds
years ages
trying failing
rising falling
fighting losing
laughing crying
sleeping screaming
hoping bleeding
breathing dying
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Luinil
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2004-06-10 15:46:54]
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Re: pendulum
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by Overstated on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 03:55:40 PM AEST
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sometimes opposite words sometimes not
I like the last line summaries the difference between life and death well... |
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Re: pendulum
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by Archie on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 05:49:41 PM AEST
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| Good poem although you did not use exact opposites to make the title stick the analogies you used are good. |
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Re: pendulum
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by pixie on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 06:08:08 PM AEST
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Great poem, keep em coming
pixie xx |
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Re: pendulum
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by Ethereal_Engine on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 08:46:13 PM AEST
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| Short and to the point. On the left happy positive things and on the right painful negative things, like a pendulum. The scheme of life the good and the bad. Balance is key ^^. |
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