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Missing You Tonight
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 02:41:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Tonight my arms will not embrace you,
I won’t hear your words in my head ring true,
I know I’ll see you in the light of tomorrow,
But my heart can’t help but feel some sorrow.
My bed tonight you will not share,
If I wake in the night you won’t be there,
I wish you were here by my side.
Smiling at me and open your arms wide.
I watch the time ticking by,
My heart lets out a lonely cry,
I long to be with you and hold you to me,
I want to open my eyes and there you’ll be.
We keep in contact all night by text,
I can’t wait until I hear from you next,
I think of you every second,
To your heart I feel myself being beckoned.
I am missing you so much tonight,
Wishing for you to hold onto me tight,
My longing for you grows with time,
I have to pinch myself to think you are mine.
Tonight my dreams will be filled with your face,
It’ll feel like you here even though you are in a different place,
Absence makes the heart grow fonder,
Forever in my thoughts you wonder.
I want you with every inch of my heart,
I miss you right from the second we part,
So my love even though you’re not here,
I can still hear your loving words ringing in my ear.
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pixie
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Re: Missing You Tonight
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 02:48:37 PM AEST
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It definitely sounds like you love this man to me. It is hard being apart from them. It's like part of you is missing. You pretty well summed up the situation and penned it well.
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Re: Missing You Tonight
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 02:59:41 PM AEST
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Really lovely write..and nice idea....
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Re: Missing You Tonight
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by willow_tara72002 on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 04:19:02 PM AEST
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| I really like this one,. it really shows hows how you feel about mark, and it can be related to because everyone has alongin to be with the person they love |
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Re: Missing You Tonight
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 07:55:26 PM AEST
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They say absence makes the heart grow fonder, as is evident in this write! well done!
angel always...joni |
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Re: Missing You Tonight
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by SweetRhythm on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 05:39:33 AM AEST
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Whoa Pixie that was so beautifully writen. One can really sence the loving bond thats shared as you expressed your feelings in such a deep mood. Lovely work, you seem to be on a roll at the moment with all your poem submits, great to see your work is still flourishing as ever. I look forward to the rest.
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Re: Missing You Tonight
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by Rhei76 on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 08:27:24 AM AEST
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| Sweetly beautiful. |
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Re: Missing You Tonight
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by arden on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 12:39:34 PM AEST
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so very sweet. it shows your love very well.
greatly written. your flow was perfect.
wonderful write.
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Re: Missing You Tonight
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by lexxie on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 10:49:39 AM AEST
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this is so sweet beautiful
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