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Hiding
Contributed by
diamond_tears
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Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 01:57:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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A vast black hole,
Hidden by a smile.
Hours of loneliness,
Hidden by laughter.
Silvery-purple clothes,
Hidden by clothes.
A young girl,
Hiding from the world.
Suffering in silence,
To cause no more hurt.
Pleading that someone will notice,
The pain deep within.
Hidden from the exterior,
She draws the strength to live.
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diamond_tears
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2004-06-10 13:57:45]
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Re: Hiding
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by hooray_its_jen on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 02:14:45 PM AEST
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Very nice write, it had a lot of emotion in it. I know how you feel, I can totally relate. Very good job!
~Jenna |
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Re: Hiding
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by pixie on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 02:45:04 PM AEST
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This is a very sad poem, but yet a greatly written one, well done
pixie xx |
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Re: Hiding
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by Silent-No-More on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 06:05:53 PM AEST
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Very moving, DT.... It's terribly sad how much we go through alone. Hope you find the strength sometimes to let the outside in and the inside out. *hug*
SNM |
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Re: Hiding
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by diamond_tears on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 06:34:04 PM AEST
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| crap its supposed to read "silvery purple scars" sorry.. thanx for the replies!!!!!!!! |
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