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Aunt Ellinor
Contributed by
sammydid
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Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 12:39:05 PM in AEST
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I watch for her from the window and I blow on the glass to make breath pictures while I wait
If the picture is bright enough, then she is healthy and she is coming back
I yell 'Dad! Dad, come look!' but my picture faded away
When that happens, it means she is not coming back; I pray for her every night
I pray that she is sitting right next to me, holding my hand while I sleep, I just wish she was back
I pray that she is with some one she loves, sometimes I even think she is talking to me
My Father is sad, too. To me she was like a best friend, somebody who would have fun wherever she was
Somebody who would not care how old she was. She was so much fun. I lost a great friend.
I hope that never happens again.
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Re: Aunt Ellinor
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by buchi on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 06:23:14 AM AEST
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| Yes...I hope you never loose her!! I loved this poem... |
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Re: Aunt Ellinor
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 07:40:47 PM AEST
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| Sad but very good. I liked the phrase "breath pictures". |
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