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Tighten the rope
Contributed by
MDodgen
on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 11:43:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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burning butterflies
quench my thirst
under the sea
bubbles of hate
at me
i watch you fade
silk darkness slides over
we run for the light
take me from here
my world of false promises
tighten the rope
and cease the flow
blood drowns my brain
you call to me still
how do you do it?
why should you stay?
answers without questions
society without a mind
i lay in the pool
your hair shining so bright
sleep with me
in waves of lust.
i'll be right here
forever if i must.
Copyright ©
MDodgen
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2004-06-10 11:43:56]
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Re: Tighten the rope
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by purplestary on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 12:00:37 PM AEST
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| nice poem. it flows good and is expressed well. |
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Re: Tighten the rope
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by holderofthestone on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 08:41:26 PM AEST
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| well crafted and nice wording. leaves a strong feeling behind. A+++ |
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